Monday, October 6, 2008

Work in progress - Update

Result of "Print Ad" Inspiration. Kind of went berserk with the idea due to finishing this darn thing after 3 in the morning and getting lack of sleep prior to class today. -_-;;
Upgraded version. Need some input about these items. ;_;

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

These are very cool. I really love the bubble look of the newest one you've done. Still not sure about the design behind the blue one, but I think you already knew that. :D

Marcelo Meijome said...

Yeah, I like the bubble look better too. I think the blue on the samurai one might be too strong, maybe a more desaturated blue could help.

Phi said...

I like your first one very much, especially the bubble on the left side that look like a plant. Also, everything seem organic except the sign in and search box is rectangular it make it seem weird and out of place. Maybe try to combine your bubble idea into that section on the top right with the sign in link, and etc... For the second one maybe you should work on the value of the blue, it's look kind of overwhelming.

Over all nice design thought, just a few fixing up would do the trick.

Anonymous said...

I really like these however they don't seem to be using all what is used on the Veer website. However you may not be finished I do know how you like to do most your work till the last minute. But I really like the way you designed these.

Jesse Kaylor said...

Very nice! You've got some great detail while incorporating the necessary features, yet it doesn't overpower you.